Paper #1--Epics and Culture
RUS 370/Fall 2010
Due September 30
1) Both parts of this assignment must be typed,
double-spaced, 1 inch margins, 12 pt (or larger) type and submitted in
hard copy, or I will not accept them;
2) There is no required length. I do not believe in
them and I will not even give you a ballpark estimate. Answer the
questions as completely as you think is necessary to prove your point,
with emphasis on completely;
3) The goal is for you to analyze American culture
as a folklorist would. You should assume that your audience is other
folklorists, so that you do not need to explain established theories in
great detail. Note: you still must use theories in a detailed enough
manner to make clear your understanding, but you need not explain them
as you would to a layperson;
4) Assessment
Rubric: This paper will be assessed in the following
way:
Analysis
15 The paper presents a plausible analysis that goes
beyond the commonplace by offering original
insights, both in terms of the whole and particular parts of
the data.
12 The paper presents a plausible analysis and may
contain one or two original insights but on the
whole does not go beyond the common range of
interpretations.
9 The paper reiterates in general terms a common
interpretation of the material with no original
ideas.
6 This paper presents original ideas that weaken the
plausibility of the analysis.
0 The paper does not offer a data analysis.
Strength of Argument
10 The paper offers a logical, coherent argument for
the analysis with a well-forumated thesis and conclusion. All
assertions are supported and amplified with details from personal
experience or from other sources. The writer
pursues an original line of argument in at least one portion of the
paper.
8 The paper offers a logical, coherent argument for
the analysis but only partially supports or amplifies the assertions,
the thesis/conclusion are not as well
formulated. Or the writer does not pursue an original line of
argument.
6 The paper offers an argument that contains some
lapses in logic and/or offers only minimal support
or amplification of assertions. Thesis/conclusion not
well-
formulated
4 The paper offers an argument that is seriously
flawed in logic or that fails to support or amplify
most or all assertions. The paper is basically a list with no
attempt to support the argument, no
thesis/conclusion.
0 The paper does not present an argument to support
the data analysis.
Incorporation of Counterarguments
5 This paper acknowledges significant
counterarguments (alternative interpretations and
reasons) and either effectively refutes or successfully
accommodates them into the interpretation being
argued.
4 The paper acknowledges several but not all
counterarguments and refutes or accommodates
some.
3 The paper acknowledges at least one counterargument
(perhaps more) but is unsuccessful in the attempt to
refute or to accommodate it/them.
2 The paper mentions at least one counterargument but
makes no attempt to refute or accommodate
it.
0 The paper ignores all counterarguments.
Relation to the
Whole/Significance
15 The significance of the analysis offered (either
in relation to culture as a whole or to the larger
context of oral poetry in which the data are situated) forms an
integral part of the argument. The connections are
profound, interesting, or complex.
12 The paper makes clear the significance of the
analysis either in relation to culture as a whole or
to the larger context of oral poetry in which the data are
situated. The connections are plausible.
9 The paper offers some mention of the significance
of the analysis or the significance is somewhat
loosely implied. The connections are plausible, but
somewhat obvious.
6 The paper offers some mention of the significance
of the analysis, but the connections are not
plausible.
0 The paper makes no attempt to mention significance.
Spelling/Grammar/Citations
5 This paper has no errors in language, usage, or
citations (footnotes/bibliography) and uses the
required number of sources--see my web site for my language pet
peeves
4 This paper has one consistent error in language,
usage, or citations and uses the required number of
sources.
3 This paper has several errors in language, usage,
or citations and uses the required number of sources.
2 This paper has frequent errors in language, usage,
or citations and uses the required number of sources.
0 This paper is incomprehensible due to errors in
language, usage, or citations and does not use the required number of
sources.
Theory
10 This paper demonstrates a thorough understanding
of the epic patterns and epic theories we have
discussed to date.
8 This paper demonstrates a reasonable understanding
of epic patterns and the epic theories we have
discussed to date, but is not as complete as it should be.
6 This paper demonstrates a rudimentary/surface
understanding of the epic patterns and the epic
theories we have discussed to date.
4 This paper demonstrates a poor understanding of the
epic patterns and the epic theories we have
discussed to date.
0 This paper demonstrates no understanding of the
epic patterns and epic theories we have discussed to
date.
5) Assignment:
To complete this assignment, you must watch the
movie The Deerhunter. Even if you have seen this film, WATCH IT AGAIN.
You will be looking at it in a whole new way. You can watch it at the
Young Media Library (AV-D2795), you will need your card/id to check it
out. You may want to watch it in small groups for additional input on
the film. You can also rent it and watch it at home. Be aware
that it is a long movie (well over two hours), so that you may want to
watch it in two sittings. Watching the film more than once is
recommended as well, remember this is your primary source, so that you
should be extremely familiar with it.
Part 1: Write an essay analyzing the film in view of your
knowledge about the structure AND function of epic (recall the patterns
of dragonslayer, quest and/or battle epics as well as all the other
epic features we discussed). Include a discussion of whether this
movie functions as an epic in American society and why you think so. It
is a given that this is not an oral poem, so that you do not need to
discuss that issue. Rather you should be concerned with structure and
content, mythical patterns, character behaviors and how they reflect
ideal, flaws, adult issues, and how epic serves to heal and realign a
nation (group and individuals therein). I have seen the movie many
times, you do not need to give me a plot summary as part of the paper.
If a portion of the plot is instrumental to your argument, a brief
recap (so that I know what you are talking about) is fine, but there is
no need to give pages of summary before you begin your analysis.
Warning: The Deerhunter is a violent movie about the Vietnam War.
If you think you will be bothered by this, close your eyes, but ask
someone else to tell you what happened, in case it is important to your
paper. If you cannot do even that, come see me.
Part 2: This part should be typed on completely separate sheet(s)
of paper and is due on the same day as the part 1. Do NOT attach
it/staple it to the portion on the the epic function and structure. As
you watch, note any cultural features/behaviors/ mores/traditions that
are particularly Russian. Make a list of everything you noticed and
discuss briefly whether they conform to or contradict your expectations
of East Slavic life based on your knowledge of folk practices. This
film was made in Slavic communities in Pennsylvania and Ohio, so that
you might find quite a few similarities as well as things that surprise
you. We will discuss your observations in class. This portion will
count as a homework assignment.
6) Steps for this paper to be most
successful:
1) Before you watch the film, research the Vietnam
war. The best source is George Herring’s, America's Longest War: The
United States and Vietnam, 1950-1975. You must use at least one print
source for this paper, e.g. some historical source on the Vietnam War.
However, there are also good on-line sources that may help you as well;
http://www.vietnam.ttu.edu/index.htm and www.loc.gov/vets are two of
those. You may also want to interview people who remember or
participated in the war. You might also consider looking into reactions
to the film when it was released (in film reviews and the like) as well
as one of the many books on the Vietnam War in film available at WT
Young;
2) Once you have done your initial research on the
war, review the material on the structure and function of epics that we
have discussed; use your handouts and Bailey’s introductions to each
epic thoughtfully, they can provide extremely valuable information for
your argument. Reread the epics, focusing on the
dragonslayer/battle/quest epics. Make specific references to the epics
we have read (or to other epics you may have read before). The best
papers show a great deal of familiarity with the epics themselves and
use them to support their arguments;
3) Make a check list for yourself on
issues/behaviors/material you must watch for while viewing the film to
determine whether it might be classified as an epic;
4) Watch the film, making notes on the elements that
either fit or do not fit the epic structural pattern; notice that this
is not step 1!;
5) Do not become fixated on structure alone! Epic
function is just as important as structure. Consider this film with the
context of U.S. society and whether it might have served to help people
cope with the war both individually and as a group. Remember, epics
restore social balance and reinforce belief systems;
6) You should consider whether this film fits into
another genre we have discussed as well. It may or may not, but it is
worth considering;
7) Write an outline of the paper. It does not have to
be a classic outline with A, B, C, but a sketch of the points you want
to make and the way you are going to prove them. Be sure that you
understand the concept of counterarguments: possible objections to your
claims that I (or another person) might pose. Anticipate alternate
conclusions and address why your interpretation of the data is better
than those are;
8) Your bibliography should include not only
references to all print materials, but also 1) the film; 2) web sites;
and 3) interviews;
9) Think for yourself. Just because I am asking you
to evaluate this film as an epic, does not mean it must be an epic! You
need to think critically about the data to write a convincing paper;
10) Give yourself plenty of time to do all these
steps thoroughly. If you try to rush this project, it will be obvious,
and the paper will not be as strong.